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Puerto Rico

Bright skys that aren't always blue. Warm air that's passing thourgh. It's so wonderful here. Cuz i am so high off the ground. I wonder if i will ever come down. Beautiful, relaxing, waveless beaches. With sand so soft. That it's like soft fuzzy peaches gently caressing the bottom of my feet. With all it can give with its many different favors. Live is good on this relaxing sensation. But there are flaws and yes i will tell. Long flights, cheap sheets, smelly people, and itchy seats. But there is one thing that i shall never forget, That once i land on that island it's all wroth it in the end.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/16/2016 11:56:00 PM
cassandra durham, creative and well done. Thank you for sharing. **SKAT**
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Date: 5/14/2016 2:40:00 PM
CASSANDRA, Fantastic writing, glad to read your poem. ~Love LINDA~
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Date: 5/19/2009 3:08:00 PM
This sounds like a real treat. I have never been there; however, I am looking forward to taking the trip one day soon. Great job! ~Joseph
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Date: 5/10/2009 3:59:00 AM
What a wonderful tribute to Puerto Rico! - jeremiah
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Date: 5/6/2009 7:42:00 AM
I like this poem....the title caught my eye because this is where i was born....and with any flight to any destination...like you expressed, it's all worth it in the end...*smiles*
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