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Puddles Left In Silence

As music of falling rain’s song can be heard, thunder claps. Before the clouds break and the sun’s rays come shining through the gray, the fog lifts with fresh scent of rain and puddles left in silence. Heidi Sands 3/26/21

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Vernon Witmer

Date: 4/2/2021 6:59:00 AM

that's beautiful.

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/2/2021 7:09:00 AM

Thank you Vernon :)

Joseph May

Date: 3/26/2021 12:03:00 PM

Wonderful write Heidi, hugs

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/26/2021 12:15:00 PM

Thank you, Joseph hugs :)

Quoth Theraven

Date: 3/26/2021 7:05:00 AM

Heidi, I like the view from your side of the clouds. -Richard

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/26/2021 7:58:00 AM

I am happy you like it Richard. I hope you have a nice day today :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/26/2021 7:04:00 AM

Beautiful poem Heidi. Each line evokes an unfolding image to portray the changing nature scenes. Really well written.

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/26/2021 7:57:00 AM

Thank you very much Vijay. I appreciate your kind words :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/26/2021 6:12:00 AM

- Hope the storm is over ... and you can enjoy the silence ... lovely described, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/26/2021 6:28:00 AM

Thank you Anne-Lise. It is still rainy with fog and possible thunderstorm later. I appreciate your kind comment . Hugs :)