Heidi Sands Poet Sijo

Puddles Left In Silence

As music of falling rain’s song can be heard, thunder claps.
Before the clouds break and the sun’s rays come shining through the gray,
the fog lifts with fresh scent of rain and puddles left in silence.

Heidi Sands

3/26/21

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Vernon Witmer April 2, 2021 at 6:59 AM that's beautiful. Heidi Sands April 2, 2021 at 7:09 AM Thank you Vernon :)

Joseph May March 26, 2021 at 12:03 PM Wonderful write Heidi, hugs Heidi Sands March 26, 2021 at 12:15 PM Thank you, Joseph hugs :)

Quoth Theraven March 26, 2021 at 7:05 AM Heidi, I like the view from your side of the clouds. -Richard Heidi Sands March 26, 2021 at 7:58 AM I am happy you like it Richard. I hope you have a nice day today :)

Vijay Pandit March 26, 2021 at 7:04 AM Beautiful poem Heidi. Each line evokes an unfolding image to portray the changing nature scenes. Really well written. Heidi Sands March 26, 2021 at 7:57 AM Thank you very much Vijay. I appreciate your kind words :)

Anne-Lise Andresen March 26, 2021 at 6:12 AM - Hope the storm is over ... and you can enjoy the silence ... lovely described, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Heidi Sands March 26, 2021 at 6:28 AM Thank you Anne-Lise. It is still rainy with fog and possible thunderstorm later. I appreciate your kind comment . Hugs :)