Puddles

Reflections ripple
In puddles rain left behind
Nature’s mud-mirrors
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
April 27, 2011 at 5:50 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Debra. Love, Carol
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April 25, 2011 at 11:23 AM
Debra, even though i'm 30 + some... i enjoy kicking them puddles like a little kid... nice poem to have featured... take care..p.d.
Mehta Avatar
April 25, 2011 at 7:15 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Debra
Ra Avatar
April 21, 2011 at 10:02 AM
Hello Debra, glad to see you here, nice Haiku, I like the last line. "Mud-mirrors" very imaginative.
Greenlee Avatar
April 21, 2011 at 9:31 AM
this is awesome.thanks for your wonderful comment......Kacey
Hunt Avatar
April 20, 2011 at 8:45 PM
Wonderful Haiku Debra:)
Johnson Avatar
April 20, 2011 at 1:23 PM
silvered in completly , they reflect God's love.
M Avatar
April 19, 2011 at 8:25 PM
Nice haiku Debra :)
Foulk Avatar
April 19, 2011 at 5:49 PM
Beautiful Haiku, enjoyed it very much.
Fiery Avatar
April 19, 2011 at 3:44 PM
nice work Debra ....ur a natural poetess
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