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Dedicated to Evelyn Judy Buehler. I love the joy and color she brings to her poetry! Pink puddle of petals, precious underneath the parasol tree. Celebrant-pear in bridal white — pairs walk down the chapel aisle. The vigor of a garden dressed — up and down the rows, I’m restless. Blossoms of bittersweet passion — red and tangerine attraction. Sunspree of yellow jonquils — tiptoeing tiny-tim-like through them. No mortal map or shovel can undermine the undiscovered pearly gate of Eden. Roses blush with tinted cheeks — a suitor pinches a couple dozen. Black-eye in the center of a coneflower — red-tinged-xanthous Susan rays of Summer. Precious and few, our foray of the perfect, the most extensive, the coolest environment. Golden buttermilk rose, with its ruffled petals — pleasant scent neighboring the paprika yarrow. What worth Eden — its treasures of rainbow showers, scents that are mind boggling, its puddles of petals? 3/22/2021

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Date: 3/25/2021 7:18:00 AM
So many colors. You make good use of them.
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Date: 3/24/2021 1:30:00 PM
Lovely Kim. Such beautiful description of color. Loved it. God Bless. JB
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/24/2021 3:41:00 PM
Thank you, Judy! :)
Date: 3/23/2021 9:01:00 PM
Thank you so much, dear Kim, for the lovely dedication! I am deeply honored. Your poem is exquisitely lovely. I got such joy from the delightful wealth of colors and blooms-and the marriage! This is a fave, my friend. :D
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/24/2021 3:36:00 AM
Thank you so much! Hugs...Kim
Date: 3/23/2021 7:18:00 PM
WoW! Kim, You have penned such a fitting dedication piece to Evelyn Judy Buehler. The lovely and vibrant colors in this piece is just breathtaking. I'm sure she will just love it. Excellent job. Have a wonderful evening:-)Alexis
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/24/2021 3:37:00 AM
Thank you, Alexis!
Date: 3/23/2021 4:10:00 PM
You opened us up to a paradise of Eden, with your colorful display of words, this is the kind of poetry I enjoy, Thank you Kim, :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/23/2021 6:07:00 PM
Thank you so much!

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