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Iron stained toilet Floating cockroaches spoil it Gut wrenching toilet By Robb A. Kopp All Rights Reserved © MMX

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/6/2010 4:31:00 AM
Eeeeek! Hate those public toilets that are not kept up by personnel who own them. Makes my skin crawl. Great haiku.
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Date: 9/3/2010 9:24:00 AM
Sounds terrible.I mean very descriptive of some public places in the USA....Wouldn't want to be in that one right now..Sara
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Date: 9/2/2010 8:01:00 AM
like at the gas stations
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Date: 9/2/2010 5:05:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Robb but my tummy did turn. I will not be reading poetry for a few days as I will be gone from Friday until Monday. I wish you a weekend filled with good health, love, and loads of inspiration. Love and Blessings, Carol
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Date: 9/1/2010 12:05:00 PM
very vivid image here. thanks for sharing your creativity with us. keep up the good work.
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