Public Restroom

Iron stained toilet
Floating cockroaches spoil it
Gut wrenching toilet

By Robb A. Kopp
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Marcum Wong Avatar
September 6, 2010 at 4:31 AM
Eeeeek! Hate those public toilets that are not kept up by personnel who own them. Makes my skin crawl. Great haiku.
Kendrick Avatar
September 3, 2010 at 9:24 AM
Sounds terrible.I mean very descriptive of some public places in the USA....Wouldn't want to be in that one right now..Sara
Palli Avatar
September 2, 2010 at 8:01 AM
like at the gas stations
Brown Avatar
September 2, 2010 at 5:05 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Robb but my tummy did turn. I will not be reading poetry for a few days as I will be gone from Friday until Monday. I wish you a weekend filled with good health, love, and loads of inspiration. Love and Blessings, Carol
Cobb Avatar
September 1, 2010 at 12:05 PM
very vivid image here. thanks for sharing your creativity with us. keep up the good work.
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