Public Enemies

"Frogs' eyes do not stop a cow
                  from drinking water in a river," - Kimeru Saying.



We found ourselves kissing
near a parking lot. It was deep,
passionate and warm. I held
her so close I could feel her heartbeat
on my chest.

In the midst of kisses,
some eyes rolled,
with the look of "go find a room!"
written on their faces.

We had become social outcasts,
for displaying love around the elderly,
children, and priestly class. As our laws
demand, it is not right to express actions
that would make anyone uncomfortable.

Still, we went on kissing.....

Love could not pretend in public places.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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U.D Palawon  Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 10:43 AM
:D :D In my society, people would make sure to find from which family you are and by the morrow it would become news!!! But I believe in "live and let live" for God sake! Congrats :) Sunita
Kimathi Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 5:22 PM
Lolest!! Thanks Sunita, for your kind applause!! *^_^*
Medders Tobechi Avatar
August 12, 2016 at 12:44 PM
How very different from life in USA. People care little for what they do in public. Congratulations!
Kimathi Avatar
August 12, 2016 at 4:29 PM
Lolest. Thank you so much for your applause, Janis!! ;-)
Chansarkar Avatar
August 12, 2016 at 9:03 AM
haha, yes that rule begs to be broken definitely.Loved it Teddy and congrats to you!
Kimathi Avatar
August 12, 2016 at 4:27 PM
Hehehe. Thank you Sara, for passing by to enjoy and applaud my work!! ;-)
Devnath  Avatar
July 15, 2016 at 4:22 PM
A beautiful poem for the breaking rule contest. Good idea my lovely smiling friend. i feel winning gem it's. Good luck with a beautiful 7. Loved always, bl
Kimathi Avatar
August 12, 2016 at 4:25 PM
Thanks so much BL, for your applause and continuous support!! ;-)
Dietrich Avatar
July 12, 2016 at 9:23 AM
LOVE It!!! Was this for breaking a rule contest? IF so, ingenious idea.
Kimathi Avatar
July 13, 2016 at 7:50 AM
Yes, it was for the breaking a rule contest... Thanks for your kind comment, Andrea!! *^_^*
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