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4/14/2024

Contest: Pick-a-Title, Vol 43

Sponsor: Edward Ibeh

The relentless enemy, from a trench, Wages psychological war. Against the barrage, your teeth clench As he fires shots you can't ignore. You are not good enough; you must do more. You are inadequate, for sure. Better yet, don't get up from the floor. You're bound to fail, simple and pure. Your foe escalates with a hand grenade - You are a pathetic case. No one could ever want you, I'm afraid. Stay home and hide your face. Your brutal antagonist now drops a nuke, And you freeze inside your core. In this world, you are a freakish fluke. There's no place for you no more. Oh, the pernicious, insidious dread - It's the voice from the trenches in your head.

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Date: 4/25/2024 5:31:00 AM
Very grand poem. The last two lines, especially, are beautiful.
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David Crandall
Date: 4/25/2024 8:08:00 AM
Thanks Christuraj!
Date: 4/23/2024 6:39:00 PM
Thanks, Edward - glad you liked it. I enjoyed the challenge and writing it.
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Date: 4/23/2024 3:49:00 PM
Wow, this is a superb poem, David. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest!
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David Crandall
Date: 4/23/2024 6:59:00 PM
Thanks, Edward - glad you liked it. I enjoyed the challenge and writing it.

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