Jeff Connelly Poet Shape

Psycho Muse

looking up
at the down
spout shower head
reaching
as if trying
to take a selfie
but really
just adjusting
the water's flow

and so
a stream erodes
two peaks as it leaks
down from thighs
to knees beneath
to ankles then to feet
to toes flowing ten fold
down a counterclockwise 
drain a
         n
       d
      a
    g
  a
  i             O
  n                           eyes
     i'                       her
       d                   at
         r              ok
          a         lo
             ther

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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart March 15, 2019 at 8:21 PM You managed to pull off a performance piece on the page. Fanfreakntastic! That's hard to do well. xomo Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart March 16, 2019 at 9:48 AM I look for you in the New Poems list :) I don't always comment right away, wait for the swirling to settle. Jeff Connelly March 16, 2019 at 9:16 AM Waking to find a second compliment from you on two poems written the same day. I am humbled Maureen. Thank you so much.