Psycho Muse

looking up
at the down
spout shower head
reaching
as if trying
to take a selfie
but really
just adjusting
the water's flow

and so
a stream erodes
two peaks as it leaks
down from thighs
to knees beneath
to ankles then to feet
to toes flowing ten fold
down a counterclockwise 
drain a
         n
       d
      a
    g
  a
  i             O
  n                           eyes
     i'                       her
       d                   at
         r              ok
          a         lo
             ther

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 3/15/2019 8:21:00 PM
You managed to pull off a performance piece on the page. Fanfreakntastic! That's hard to do well. xomo
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 3/16/2019 9:48:00 AM
I look for you in the New Poems list :) I don't always comment right away, wait for the swirling to settle.
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 3/16/2019 9:16:00 AM
Waking to find a second compliment from you on two poems written the same day. I am humbled Maureen. Thank you so much.
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