Psycho Evaluation

Psycho Evaluation



    Physically unable to deal with all this stress
        a clinical Psychiatrist said that I am depressed
            No shat Sherlock you are such a genius
                10 years of college for this uneducated guess
                    Yah you're just an Idiot with an ego to caress
                    
                    Pockets full of pens and eyeglasses to impress
                    Yes we all notice the impeccable way you dress
                    Armani styled striped suit all ironed and pressed
                    It looks quite expensive only the best for the best
                    No I don't want to do your magic ink blotter test

                    You act as if by the Almighty you are blessed
                Just like the Preacher trying to get us to confess
            So how do I know this won't end up in my arrest
        I guess I'll just have to remove you in the end more or less
    Now who is the one that's stressed???...



                          
                              revised 04/27/16

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 6/21/2016 12:56:00 AM
Brian, NICE FAV WIN.... SKAT
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Brian Davey
Date: 1/17/2019 3:59:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 5/2/2016 7:03:00 AM
Sounds like someone who is not ready for help yet, nice psycho write Brian.
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Brian Davey
Date: 5/3/2016 4:40:00 AM
Thank you so much James
Date: 5/2/2016 5:24:00 AM
Congrats for being Andrea's New Fave! Some psycho analysis you've done, Brian!
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Brian Davey
Date: 5/3/2016 4:40:00 AM
Thank you it was an honor to be picked as a fave for Andrea
Date: 5/1/2016 9:14:00 AM
I loved how you turned it back around on the psychiatrist . Poor guy has met up most likely with a serial killer wack job! I loved the Dexter show. This reminded me a bit of how Dexter might be thinking while being analyzed! Congrats in my contest, Brian.
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Brian Davey
Date: 5/1/2016 9:27:00 AM
thanks Andrea I thought that you might enjoy this poem and i am honored to be in your top fave list now!!! Have a gray day
Date: 2/7/2016 9:49:00 PM
Now thats good! :)
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Brian Davey
Date: 2/7/2016 9:52:00 PM
Thank you so much for your comments, I am glad that you enjoyed my work.
Date: 1/9/2016 2:40:00 PM
Wow! i know who is stressed
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Brian Davey
Date: 1/12/2016 11:47:00 AM
Thank you I am glad enjoyed this little twist
Date: 1/9/2016 1:41:00 PM
Way to end the psycho evaluation. Awesome poem. LINDA
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Brian Davey
Date: 1/12/2016 11:48:00 AM
thanks again
Date: 1/9/2016 7:56:00 AM
Love the rawness... And flip at the end... Skat
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Brian Davey
Date: 1/12/2016 11:49:00 AM
Happy you enjoyed it
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