Psycho Evaluation

Psycho Evaluation



    Physically unable to deal with all this stress
        a clinical Psychiatrist said that I am depressed
            No shat Sherlock you are such a genius
                10 years of college for this uneducated guess
                    Yah you're just an Idiot with an ego to caress
                    
                    Pockets full of pens and eyeglasses to impress
                    Yes we all notice the impeccable way you dress
                    Armani styled striped suit all ironed and pressed
                    It looks quite expensive only the best for the best
                    No I don't want to do your magic ink blotter test

                    You act as if by the Almighty you are blessed
                Just like the Preacher trying to get us to confess
            So how do I know this won't end up in my arrest
        I guess I'll just have to remove you in the end more or less
    Now who is the one that's stressed???...



                          
                              revised 04/27/16
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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A  Avatar
June 21, 2016 at 12:56 AM
Brian, NICE FAV WIN.... SKAT
Davey Avatar
January 17, 2019 at 3:59 AM
Thank you
Inman Avatar
May 2, 2016 at 7:03 AM
Sounds like someone who is not ready for help yet, nice psycho write Brian.
Davey Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 4:40 AM
Thank you so much James
Cheema Avatar
May 2, 2016 at 5:24 AM
Congrats for being Andrea's New Fave! Some psycho analysis you've done, Brian!
Davey Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 4:40 AM
Thank you it was an honor to be picked as a fave for Andrea
Dietrich Avatar
May 1, 2016 at 9:14 AM
I loved how you turned it back around on the psychiatrist . Poor guy has met up most likely with a serial killer wack job! I loved the Dexter show. This reminded me a bit of how Dexter might be thinking while being analyzed! Congrats in my contest, Brian.
Davey Avatar
May 1, 2016 at 9:27 AM
thanks Andrea I thought that you might enjoy this poem and i am honored to be in your top fave list now!!! Have a gray day
Vaso Avatar
February 7, 2016 at 9:49 PM
Now thats good! :)
Davey Avatar
February 7, 2016 at 9:52 PM
Thank you so much for your comments, I am glad that you enjoyed my work.
Alfred Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 2:40 PM
Wow! i know who is stressed
Davey Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 11:47 AM
Thank you I am glad enjoyed this little twist
A   Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 1:41 PM
Way to end the psycho evaluation. Awesome poem. LINDA
Davey Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 11:48 AM
thanks again
A  Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 7:56 AM
Love the rawness... And flip at the end... Skat
Davey Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 11:49 AM
Happy you enjoyed it
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