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The light show erupts with a fulgent blast. Fractals zooming out clash fast, aghast! Ears pulsating frog-marching to be in tune, with lights blinding, flashing a sonic boom. It's a psychedelic reverie, a kaleidoscope of screams! My head hurts, my brain implodes with dreams spued up from explosions in surround-sound streams. I want it to stop, but I love the extraordinary Way I'm stretched, spaced-out, ablaze and glary. Reflecting the chaos on my face and body that's contorted to a gaudy, bawdy, disemboweled anti-body.

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Date: 12/7/2024 6:00:00 PM
Dear John, the rich imagery and metaphors employed in your psychedelic reverie is enhanced by the wonderful use of your sterling rhymes. I was especially struck by "I want it to stop, but I love the extraordinary/Way I'm stretched, spaced-out, ablaze and glary." Adore the word "glary"! Congratulations for your success in Kai's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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John Anderson
Date: 12/7/2024 6:49:00 PM
Thanks very much for your kind words. Cheers and Best Wishes to you.
Date: 12/7/2024 8:22:00 AM
Beautiful. Wonderful poem and a powerful description. Sending you loving wishes, Kai
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Date: 12/7/2024 8:53:00 AM
thanks very much and best wishes,John
Date: 12/4/2024 9:18:00 PM
congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers.
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John Anderson
Date: 12/4/2024 11:16:00 PM
Thanks very much for your kind words. Cheers and Best Wishes. John

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