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Psychedelic

Inkblots of distress wane as psychedelic stars burst into fireworks 1/19/2019 Bring Color Back Into My World Contest of Kim Rodrigues

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/24/2019 8:16:00 AM

A gorgeous image, Nette! Congrats on your win in my contest!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/23/2019 6:59:00 PM

I came back to this one, and now I wonder --- could the 'distress' actually wax and wane and wax and wane?... Then again, there goes the monoku … Just a stray thought perhaps. ~ gw on LSD (Lake Shore Drive, of course)

Paul Callus

Date: 1/23/2019 4:25:00 PM

You definitely brought vigour and splashes of colour back with this excellent one-liner, Nette! Hugs // paul

Paul Callus
Date: 1/24/2019 12:08:00 PM

Back with congratulations on placing first, Nette! Very much deserved. Hugs // paul

Silent One

Date: 1/22/2019 4:49:00 AM

Great one liner Nette, you are great at these..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/21/2019 5:42:00 PM

Reads like a good contender for the contest. Way to go. Enjoyed reading your work. Sara

Leon Datu

Date: 1/20/2019 3:44:00 PM

Potent word, psychedelic. I will lose to you on this one!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/19/2019 9:25:00 PM

Interesting take on the contest, nette---and so well conceived! G.L! Best wishes, Gershon

Vladislav Raven

Date: 1/19/2019 7:32:00 PM

Hi Nette, such a wonderful Momoku for the contest. Your words paint such a vivid canvas. An excellent write. All the best in the contest. Readlike a winner to me. Have wonderful Sunday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/19/2019 4:39:00 PM

Excellent! Just perfect Nette :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/19/2019 3:57:00 PM

Wow! Nette, In a few words you spoke volumes! It looks amazing. Well done. I hope to see you on the winners list. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

Lyva Marty

Date: 1/19/2019 3:50:00 PM

Wow! From dreariness to a world of radiance. Thank you for nudging my muse to get to work!