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Psychedelic

Inkblots of distress wane as psychedelic stars   burst into fireworks





1/19/2019
Bring Color Back Into My World
Contest of Kim Rodrigues

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Kim Rodrigues

January 24, 2019 at 8:16 AM

A gorgeous image, Nette! Congrats on your win in my contest!

Gershon Wolf

January 23, 2019 at 6:59 PM

I came back to this one, and now I wonder --- could the 'distress' actually wax and wane and wax and wane?... Then again, there goes the monoku … Just a stray thought perhaps. ~ gw on LSD (Lake Shore Drive, of course)

Paul Callus

January 23, 2019 at 4:25 PM

You definitely brought vigour and splashes of colour back with this excellent one-liner, Nette! Hugs // paul

Paul Callus

January 24, 2019 at 12:08 PM

Back with congratulations on placing first, Nette! Very much deserved. Hugs // paul

Silent One

January 22, 2019 at 4:49 AM

Great one liner Nette, you are great at these..

Sara Kendrick

January 21, 2019 at 5:42 PM

Reads like a good contender for the contest. Way to go. Enjoyed reading your work. Sara

Leon Datu

January 20, 2019 at 3:44 PM

Potent word, psychedelic. I will lose to you on this one!

Gershon Wolf

January 19, 2019 at 9:25 PM

Interesting take on the contest, nette---and so well conceived! G.L! Best wishes, Gershon

Vladislav Raven

January 19, 2019 at 7:32 PM

Hi Nette, such a wonderful Momoku for the contest. Your words paint such a vivid canvas. An excellent write. All the best in the contest. Readlike a winner to me. Have wonderful Sunday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Heidi Sands

January 19, 2019 at 4:39 PM

Excellent! Just perfect Nette :)

Alexis Y.

January 19, 2019 at 3:57 PM

Wow! Nette, In a few words you spoke volumes! It looks amazing. Well done. I hope to see you on the winners list. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

Lyva Marty

January 19, 2019 at 3:50 PM

Wow! From dreariness to a world of radiance. Thank you for nudging my muse to get to work!

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