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Hey let me holla at you to alleviate your frustration Stand still it will only take a moment of your attention Look, I hear your cries but I don’t want any explanation I just wanna be fair and clear in my summation: What I was in love with was your presentation Because you never showed me your true intention Stoned, amazed, but I’m not hurt by the realization Part of me have long foresee your treason You think I got played, but here is your failed realization: We were both playing the game of love and devotion. I will be lying to admit any tear of desperation Seeing your true color has brought me liberation Hey! I should have never lower my expectation Wasting time going through all this commotion When you spent all your time throwing accusation While I was going through the process of elimination. So sad that your betrayal did not evoke any emotion I guess you were never worth my time and attention Can’t help that you were never the object of my fascination It’s not my fault you never knew how to keep my admiration Now that is over you wanna write me a dissertation Crying, begging, and blaming all the creation But it’s too late! You should’ve learned life’s biggest lesson: Never ever let go of the brightest star in a constellation. No more talking. I’m over your desecration This is the end there is no need for elongation Letting go have brought me to a new exhilaration Free at last! You’re a past chapter closed without hesitation.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 7/10/2016 11:41:00 PM
nahomie julien, nicely penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. always **SKAT**
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Date: 6/12/2016 11:07:00 PM
nahomie, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 6/8/2016 12:14:00 AM
nahomie julien, wow, that was a very good read. SKAT
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