Psalm For the Broken

Desperate, broken, needing love
Descending low through the air
Your Holy Spirit like a dove
Came to me in my despair

Confused, tattered, bitterly torn
Needing a full release
By your grace I am reborn
Now I know your loving peace

Day by day I’m seeking you
In your Word you are found
It tells me that I’m brand new
Your mercy and love richly abound

I am filled with joy and I sing
Blessing you with all my heart
Worshiping and praising my God & King
Honor and glory to You I impart

Thank you, Lord, for calling me
Out of the muck and mire
You opened my heart and eyes to see
It is truly You that I desire

		John Stasukevich
		3/20/2023
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Cloyd Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 11:57 AM
I LOVED THIS INSPIRATIONAL POEM. THE RHYTHM WAS SYSTEMIC WITH THE FLOW.
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August 22, 2023 at 1:19 PM
AWESOME POEM FOR THE BROKEN!
Mcconnell Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 7:09 AM
Great penning John, such beautiful words set so superbly with lovely rhyme and flow and with good imagery too. Blessings from Scotland,, Gordon
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August 22, 2023 at 11:35 AM
Thank you, Gordon. I'm honored by such kind remarks. Especially from you, having written so many more poems than me, a novice. BTW visiting your country to play golf is on my bucket list. Blessings~John
Morris Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 4:50 AM
This is a lovely and moving piece. Thank you for sharing. May you always experience hope and peace. Blessings and best wishes. :-)
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August 22, 2023 at 5:36 AM
Thank you, Michelle. I really appreciate your blessing to me. So, I give you this blessing: May the Lord make you increase and abound in love, so that he may establish your heart blameless in holiness before our God and Father, at the coming of our Lord Jesus with all his saints. John
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August 22, 2023 at 1:16 AM
Hi John, That is so beautiful. I pray everyday to Jehovah through Jesus for help. Frances
Stasukevich Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 6:06 AM
Thanks, same to you
Byrne Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 5:34 AM
Hi John, So True. I hope that you have a beautiful, blessed day. Frances
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August 22, 2023 at 5:26 AM
Thank you, Frances. Your kind words inspire me. Your help truly comes from the Lord, Psalm 121. He is our deliverer, Psalm 18:2. Blessings~John
Baker Avatar
August 1, 2023 at 1:33 PM
I'm really pleased with this effort. Kudos. I wish that Rush Limbaugh was still around for thie New millennia though. Have you ever read any Franklin Graham or Tony Campolo. How about Hal Lindsey or Phillipians
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August 1, 2023 at 3:03 PM
Thanks, LeRoy. I was an avid listener of Rush Limbaugh. I believe that man was the voice of truth. I remember the first time I heard him on the radio he was saying just what I was thinking but in a very eloquent way and in a way I just couldn't put it. I really miss him. I haven't read any of those authors but I've read RC Sproul, Jerry Brdges, JI Packer (Hot Tub Religion is a fav) John Eldridge, Bob Goff and others. I like Christian authors. John Eldridge wrote a great book called Wild at Heart. I highly recommend that any man read that book. And of course, I've read Philippians many times. All of Paul's writings are amazing, especially considering he was inspired by God. I appreciate your comment. As for this poem, God gave me these words after going thru the most difficult time of my life. Blessings~John
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June 10, 2023 at 10:07 PM
Dang John beautiful!!!
Ashley Avatar
May 28, 2023 at 9:32 AM
Dear John, the potent and prayerful spirit of your poem is deeply touching. Your vibrant imagery, wonderful rhymes and humble pen expresses human vulnerability and the joy of spiritual embrace so beautifully. So full of praise and appreciation! A splendid piece! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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May 28, 2023 at 4:22 PM
Thank you, Susan. As I expressed to John Watt, but will express differently to you, in a sense the Lord comforted me by His rod & staff as I was walking through the valley of the shadow... I won't say of death, but it was pretty rough. Despair is a better word. I believe the Holy Spirit inspired me to write this. Not like He did for the writers of scripture, of course. He definitely moved me. Glad you liked it. Blessings ~ John
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May 27, 2023 at 10:00 PM
John, there is a real humility in this expression of faith: the acknowledgement of God coming to you in your time of need, that He opened your eyes and heart, and that His mercy and love richly abound. Nice use of rhymes and biblical imagery - I especially liked the Holy Spirit descending like a dove as well as the overall tone of worship. Well done - a Fav for me ~ John
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May 27, 2023 at 10:59 PM
Thank you, John. As you can surmise, this came at a time when I was going through an extremely difficult season in my life. In fact the most difficult ever! God brought me through it by His loving kindness and I was ripe to write this. Your comments encourage me to write more. Thank you for the fav. Blessings
Leiser Avatar
May 27, 2023 at 12:06 PM
Beautiful testimony of how God rescues us from despair. Well written poem, John! So happy to have you on poetry soup! :)
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May 27, 2023 at 12:45 PM
Thanks, Laura. Coming from you, that's high praise! I'm so glad to be amongst such talented people. Blessings ~ John
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