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Way to go- the narrow path

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Diane Christian

Date: 12/19/2008 12:18:00 PM

oh how great, one path, one way, with the Lord by your side brian you will always be right on track, God bless you from diane

P Sheart

Date: 12/18/2008 4:48:00 PM

Hello Brian Love the message in this! My goodness, only five words but they say sooooo much! Love Light Truth Patricia

Sharon Winter

Date: 12/18/2008 2:00:00 PM

Just so perfect sometimes Brian. You really know your poetry, to say the least. Love, Shar

Michaela Payne

Date: 12/18/2008 1:28:00 PM

You speak the truth, so much said here. Wonderful write. Blessings, ~Michaela~

James Foulk

Date: 12/18/2008 11:34:00 AM

very true message and a great Epiqram. thank you for reading my Painting on the lake and for your comment.

Christopher Higgins

Date: 12/18/2008 5:06:00 AM

Wide the road that many choose and narrow the path taken by a few. Masterfully done my brother.

Raul Moreno

Date: 12/18/2008 3:49:00 AM

Brian, you are definitely a master at the epigram form. Keep up the great work...Raul

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 12/18/2008 3:26:00 AM

Wow, so many layers and ways to read this and the title - at least 3 that i can see...excellent, how do you do that? You are a star, Mr. Brian Strand, love, Kristin

Sean Kelly

Date: 12/18/2008 12:30:00 AM

What can I say ???? .... Write onnnnnnnn ..