Ps Right On

Way
to go-
the narrow path
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Christian Avatar
December 19, 2008 at 12:18 PM
oh how great, one path, one way, with the Lord by your side brian you will always be right on track, God bless you from diane
Sheart Avatar
December 18, 2008 at 4:48 PM
Hello Brian Love the message in this! My goodness, only five words but they say sooooo much! Love Light Truth Patricia
Winter Avatar
December 18, 2008 at 2:00 PM
Just so perfect sometimes Brian. You really know your poetry, to say the least. Love, Shar
Payne Avatar
December 18, 2008 at 1:28 PM
You speak the truth, so much said here. Wonderful write. Blessings, ~Michaela~
Foulk Avatar
December 18, 2008 at 11:34 AM
very true message and a great Epiqram. thank you for reading my Painting on the lake and for your comment.
Higgins Avatar
December 18, 2008 at 5:06 AM
Wide the road that many choose and narrow the path taken by a few. Masterfully done my brother.
Moreno Avatar
December 18, 2008 at 3:49 AM
Brian, you are definitely a master at the epigram form. Keep up the great work...Raul
Reynolds Avatar
December 18, 2008 at 3:26 AM
Wow, so many layers and ways to read this and the title - at least 3 that i can see...excellent, how do you do that? You are a star, Mr. Brian Strand, love, Kristin
Kelly Avatar
December 18, 2008 at 12:30 AM
What can I say ???? .... Write onnnnnnnn ..
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