Ps3 Blues

And so once again I do return
To my qwerty lover
For free verse all about my woes
And how is this another
Sleepness night in my bedroom
For thinking about my boy
His PS3 and favourite game
Tonight he did destroy
I heard the slam
I felt the vibe
From 20ft from me
I’m so relieved my windows stayed
Unbroken from flying TV
A smart young man
And handsome too
At fifteen, 5ft 10
But if hear such more uproar
His sorry **** wont touch the floor
And so I do appeal to you
Friends across the web
Does anyone want my son
To live with you instead?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 2/26/2009 10:22:00 AM
That sounds just like my mom when I was that age, wow you sure nailed the right emotions.
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Date: 2/12/2009 5:22:00 AM
Ouch..15, not the easiest age.:) I'm not sure who it's the hardest on; the child, or the adult? Wonderfully composed verse..t'will certainly touch the hearts and minds of many. Takes a while for kids to grow into their growth spurts...but anyhow, what's all the rush? A few dozen grey hairs later, all should run smoothly.:) Great verse, certainly one that many can identify with! Blessings to you and yours...Mikki:)
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