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Providence

Suffering sunset Lost in the surf so complete My soul’s destiny

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/13/2010 4:45:00 PM
Interesting Haiku. If an entry into the contest, should be in the winner's circle. Good luck. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 2/13/2010 1:12:00 PM
Your Haiku sounds sad. Phyl
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Date: 2/13/2010 9:59:00 AM
Sad but good Haiku. Good luck in Raul's contest.
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