Wendy Watson Poet Monoku

Proverbial Monoku

Rather crudités shared between friends, than rich meat poisoned by malice.



                                             06/09/18



Better a small serving of vegetables with love than a fattened calf with hatred.

Proverbs 15 v.17 ( NIV version)



Proverbial Monoku Contest sponsored by Carol Connell

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Line Gauthier September 17, 2018 at 8:44 PM Congrats on your gold medal win, Wendy.

Eve Roper September 17, 2018 at 7:31 PM Great rewrite on your Proverb, Wendy , congratulations on your win. ~`* Hugs Eve

Kim Rodrigues September 17, 2018 at 5:17 PM Congrats, Wendy!

Andrea Dietrich September 17, 2018 at 5:03 PM great way of rephrasing it. Congrats to you.

Connie Marcum Wong September 17, 2018 at 4:45 PM Oh yes....wonderful Wendy! Congratulations on your First Placement! Wendy Watson September 17, 2018 at 4:48 PM Thanks for the encouragement, Connie.I loved the alliteration and sentiment in your version.

Tom Cunningham September 5, 2018 at 10:34 PM How true that is Wendy.