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Proverbial Monoku

Rather crudités shared between friends, than rich meat poisoned by malice. 06/09/18 Better a small serving of vegetables with love than a fattened calf with hatred. Proverbs 15 v.17 ( NIV version) Proverbial Monoku Contest sponsored by Carol Connell

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Date: 9/17/2018 8:44:00 PM
Congrats on your gold medal win, Wendy.
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Date: 9/17/2018 7:31:00 PM
Great rewrite on your Proverb, Wendy , congratulations on your win. ~`* Hugs Eve
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Date: 9/17/2018 5:17:00 PM
Congrats, Wendy!
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Date: 9/17/2018 5:03:00 PM
great way of rephrasing it. Congrats to you.
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Date: 9/17/2018 4:45:00 PM
Oh yes....wonderful Wendy! Congratulations on your First Placement!
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Wendy Watson
Date: 9/17/2018 4:48:00 PM
Thanks for the encouragement, Connie.I loved the alliteration and sentiment in your version.
Date: 9/5/2018 10:34:00 PM
How true that is Wendy.
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