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Proverbial Monoku

Sanguine songs of summer drift on by
for foolish souls who laze away.

8-31-18

Proverbs 10:5 
He that gathereth in summer is a wise son, but he that sleepeth in harvest is a son that causeth shame.

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Bette Bavington

March 9, 2019 at 6:49 PM

A good take on this. Glad I stopped by.

Vladislav Raven

October 24, 2018 at 8:48 AM

Hi Connie, once again, a much belated congratulations on your win with this wonderful write. You translated this proverb so well in this little poetic gem. Talent always shines Connie. Have a wonderful Wednesday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Line Gauthier

September 17, 2018 at 8:53 PM

Congrats on your podium finish, Connie.

Eve Roper

September 17, 2018 at 7:39 PM

Great rewrite on your Proverb, Connie , congratulations on your win. ~`* Hugs Eve

Andrea Dietrich

September 17, 2018 at 5:24 PM

Yours had one of the best "sound" effects as I was reading it. a stunner. Congratulations.

Connie Marcum Wong

September 18, 2018 at 4:35 PM

Thank you Andrea. : )

Sara Kendrick

September 9, 2018 at 7:10 AM

Good choice. Reads like a winner to me. Way to go. Sara

Anisha Dutta

September 2, 2018 at 6:48 AM

Really the monoku is very good. Almost similar proverb also exists in Bengali ( my mother tongue). All the best.

Connie Marcum Wong

September 9, 2018 at 3:11 PM

I love your country and its customs and people Anisha. Thank you my friend. : )

M. L. Kiser

September 1, 2018 at 2:33 PM

Oh, I like this...beautifully done.

Connie Marcum Wong

September 9, 2018 at 3:11 PM

Thank you much M.L. : )

Paul Callus

September 1, 2018 at 9:30 AM

Both the proverb and your monoku are impressive, Connie; excellent food for thought, unless one is too lazy to bother thinking:) Warm regards // paul

Connie Marcum Wong

September 1, 2018 at 11:46 AM

Haha...too lazy for thinking....you crack me up Paul! Thank you. : )

Andrea Dietrich

August 31, 2018 at 6:58 PM

oh I love how you did yours, Connie. One of the better ones I have seen! By the way, I just glanced at my hotmail but in answer to your question to me there, I will have lunch with my friend after school for my birthday. Maybe Joe will take me out too. I hope to see a movie tomorrow as well as on LaborDay, which I have off!!

Connie Marcum Wong

August 31, 2018 at 11:49 PM

Thank you Andrea. Enjoy your special day! : ) xxoo