Proverbial Monoku

A little discipline when young drives away foolishness from a child 08/31/18 Proverbs 22:15 Foolishness is bound in the heart of a child; but the rod of correction shall drive it far from him.
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Gauthier Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 8:51 PM
Congrats on your win, Jo.
Roper Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 7:37 PM
Great rewrite on your Proverb, Jo , congratulations on your win. ~`* Hugs Eve
Dietrich Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 5:20 PM
this is for darn sure!!! Congrats, Jo.
May Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 3:53 PM
Very true Jo..Congrats on your win
Dietrich Avatar
August 31, 2018 at 7:16 PM
Fantastic paraphrasing!!
Green Avatar
August 31, 2018 at 9:31 AM
So very true. Though it didn't work on me, most it does. :) Nicely stated Jo
Sands Avatar
August 31, 2018 at 8:17 AM
Great one Jo :)
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