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Proverbial Monoku

laying on night mats-- children dream of quietude as vile step-aunt growls --------------- 8/31/2018 Proverbial Monoku Sponsored by Carol Connell ---------------------- ‘ Fools give full vent to their rage, but the wise bring calm in the end.’ Proverbs 29:11

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Date: 9/5/2018 4:51:00 PM
Whoa!! Glad I am not in that position. Thanks for the visit to my page. Reads like a good contender for the contest. Sara
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Date: 9/3/2018 2:50:00 AM
Yikes you got me there wast expecting that!!!! :)
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Date: 9/2/2018 11:15:00 AM
Love it Nette, best wishes...
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Date: 9/1/2018 3:41:00 PM
This is a really nice written haiku, you have really wisely interpreted a really wise verse and even your choice was rewlly good, picking up this verse from a really huge book, anyway I wish you best of luck in the contest, good luck and have a really nice day
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Date: 9/1/2018 2:46:00 PM
I can see and hear that growling aunt...beautifully done. Good luck!
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Date: 9/1/2018 7:22:00 AM
A unique interpretation, Nette
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Date: 8/31/2018 10:15:00 AM
sad but what a beautiful write, Nette
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Date: 8/31/2018 9:32:00 AM
Nicely done Nette.
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Date: 8/31/2018 8:47:00 AM
Well said my friend, Nette.
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