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Proverbial Monoku

laying on night mats--

children dream of quietude

as vile step-aunt growls



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8/31/2018
Proverbial Monoku  Sponsored by Carol Connell
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‘ Fools give full vent to their rage, but the wise bring calm in the end.’
Proverbs 29:11

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Sara Kendrick Date: 9/5/2018 4:51:00 PM Whoa!! Glad I am not in that position. Thanks for the visit to my page. Reads like a good contender for the contest. Sara Login to Reply

Arthur Vaso Date: 9/3/2018 2:50:00 AM Yikes you got me there wast expecting that!!!! :) Login to Reply

Charlie Smith Date: 9/2/2018 11:15:00 AM Love it Nette, best wishes... Login to Reply

Faraz Ajmal Date: 9/1/2018 3:41:00 PM This is a really nice written haiku, you have really wisely interpreted a really wise verse and even your choice was rewlly good, picking up this verse from a really huge book, anyway I wish you best of luck in the contest, good luck and have a really nice day Login to Reply

M. L. Kiser Date: 9/1/2018 2:46:00 PM I can see and hear that growling aunt...beautifully done. Good luck! Login to Reply

Joanna Daniel Date: 9/1/2018 7:22:00 AM A unique interpretation, Nette Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 8/31/2018 10:15:00 AM sad but what a beautiful write, Nette Login to Reply

Chris Green Date: 8/31/2018 9:32:00 AM Nicely done Nette. Login to Reply

Vijay Pandit Date: 8/31/2018 8:47:00 AM Well said my friend, Nette. Login to Reply