Nette Onclaud Poet Monoku

Proverbial Monoku

laying on night mats--

children dream of quietude

as vile step-aunt growls



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8/31/2018
Proverbial Monoku  Sponsored by Carol Connell
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‘ Fools give full vent to their rage, but the wise bring calm in the end.’
Proverbs 29:11

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Sara Kendrick September 5, 2018 at 4:51 PM Whoa!! Glad I am not in that position. Thanks for the visit to my page. Reads like a good contender for the contest. Sara

Arthur Vaso September 3, 2018 at 2:50 AM Yikes you got me there wast expecting that!!!! :)

Charlie Smith September 2, 2018 at 11:15 AM Love it Nette, best wishes...

Faraz Ajmal September 1, 2018 at 3:41 PM This is a really nice written haiku, you have really wisely interpreted a really wise verse and even your choice was rewlly good, picking up this verse from a really huge book, anyway I wish you best of luck in the contest, good luck and have a really nice day

M. L. Kiser September 1, 2018 at 2:46 PM I can see and hear that growling aunt...beautifully done. Good luck!

Joanna Daniel September 1, 2018 at 7:22 AM A unique interpretation, Nette

Jack Horne August 31, 2018 at 10:15 AM sad but what a beautiful write, Nette

Chris Green August 31, 2018 at 9:32 AM Nicely done Nette.

Vijay Pandit August 31, 2018 at 8:47 AM Well said my friend, Nette.