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Proverbial Monoku

Hold her like a precious violin; she’ll bless you with her most dulcet song. Aug. 22, 2018 for the Proverbial Monoku Contest of Carol Connell Inspired by King James Bible Proverbs 4:8 Exalt her, and she shall promote thee: she shall bring thee to honour, when thou dost embrace her.

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Date: 5/25/2019 8:48:00 AM
Beautiful, Andrea. Congrats on your well deserve win.
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Date: 5/25/2019 3:37:00 AM
So beautiful Andrea... many congrats on your top win. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Date: 5/24/2019 9:26:00 PM
Beautiful! Congrats, Andrea!
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Date: 5/24/2019 6:53:00 PM
A breathtaking interpretation of the proverb, Andrea. Simply stunning. Congratulations on your wonderful win in Brian’s contest. Warmest wishes always .. ~Susan
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Date: 9/18/2018 10:22:00 AM
A beautiful take on this proverb Andrea. Congratulations on top honors!
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Date: 9/17/2018 10:18:00 PM
BIG CONGRATS to win the top position as usual. Love.
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Date: 9/17/2018 8:42:00 PM
Congrats on your gold medal win, Andrea.
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Date: 9/17/2018 7:27:00 PM
Back with a big congratulations on your win. ~`* Hugs Eve
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Date: 9/17/2018 5:15:00 PM
Congrats, Andrea!
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Date: 9/17/2018 4:38:00 PM
I loved your entry Andrea. I am happy to see it a top winner. Congratulations! : )
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Date: 9/17/2018 3:13:00 PM
I love it! Congratulations on your #1 placement - well deserved.
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Date: 9/17/2018 2:56:00 PM
Oh, this is perfect. Such a wonderful winning monoku.
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Date: 9/17/2018 1:47:00 PM
LOVELY conveyance of that Biblical theme, Andrea. CONGRATS! Janice
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Date: 9/17/2018 1:27:00 PM
Such an original but apt interpretation of the proverb, Andrea. A beautiful image.
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Date: 8/31/2018 4:27:00 PM
Beautiful Andrea! I think this will also be a winner. I love the idea presented. : )
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Date: 8/30/2018 3:19:00 AM
I love Proverbs, Andrea, and yours is brilliant:)
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Date: 8/24/2018 10:07:00 AM
Wow is all I can say.
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Date: 8/24/2018 1:57:00 AM
Wonderful proverbial monoku. You have this.
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Date: 8/23/2018 10:10:00 AM
Wonderful Andrea, best wishes and be safe...
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Date: 8/23/2018 7:20:00 AM
LO-VE-LY ! A beauty, Andrea.
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Date: 8/22/2018 9:06:00 PM
oh yes yes yes
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Date: 8/22/2018 8:50:00 PM
I like the monoku
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