Proverbial Monoku

Hold her like a precious violin; she’ll bless you with her most dulcet song.


Aug. 22, 2018 for the Proverbial Monoku Contest of Carol Connell
Inspired by King James Bible Proverbs 4:8
Exalt her, and she shall promote thee: she shall bring thee to honour, when thou dost embrace her.
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Gauthier Avatar
May 25, 2019 at 8:48 AM
Beautiful, Andrea. Congrats on your well deserve win.
Gilmour Avatar
May 25, 2019 at 3:37 AM
So beautiful Andrea... many congrats on your top win. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Rodrigues Avatar
May 24, 2019 at 9:26 PM
Beautiful! Congrats, Andrea!
Ashley Avatar
May 24, 2019 at 6:53 PM
A breathtaking interpretation of the proverb, Andrea. Simply stunning. Congratulations on your wonderful win in Brian’s contest. Warmest wishes always .. ~Susan
Wood Avatar
September 18, 2018 at 10:22 AM
A beautiful take on this proverb Andrea. Congratulations on top honors!
Dutta Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 10:18 PM
BIG CONGRATS to win the top position as usual. Love.
Gauthier Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 8:42 PM
Congrats on your gold medal win, Andrea.
Roper Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 7:27 PM
Back with a big congratulations on your win. ~`* Hugs Eve
Rodrigues Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 5:15 PM
Congrats, Andrea!
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 4:38 PM
I loved your entry Andrea. I am happy to see it a top winner. Congratulations! : )
Marc Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 3:13 PM
I love it! Congratulations on your #1 placement - well deserved.
Rowe Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 2:56 PM
Oh, this is perfect. Such a wonderful winning monoku.
Canerdy Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 1:47 PM
LOVELY conveyance of that Biblical theme, Andrea. CONGRATS! Janice
Watson Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 1:27 PM
Such an original but apt interpretation of the proverb, Andrea. A beautiful image.
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 31, 2018 at 4:27 PM
Beautiful Andrea! I think this will also be a winner. I love the idea presented. : )
Daniel Avatar
August 30, 2018 at 3:19 AM
I love Proverbs, Andrea, and yours is brilliant:)
Walker Avatar
August 24, 2018 at 10:07 AM
Wow is all I can say.
Gentry Avatar
August 24, 2018 at 1:57 AM
Wonderful proverbial monoku. You have this.
Smith Avatar
August 23, 2018 at 10:10 AM
Wonderful Andrea, best wishes and be safe...
Gauthier Avatar
August 23, 2018 at 7:20 AM
LO-VE-LY ! A beauty, Andrea.
Blown Avatar
August 22, 2018 at 9:06 PM
oh yes yes yes
Roper Avatar
August 22, 2018 at 8:50 PM
I like the monoku
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