Proud Nana

Schools are closed for Veterans’ Day
So Henry, here at home,
Requested that he have a chance
To write my daily poem.

He commandeered my notebook
And began to neatly write,
Resulting in a poem so cool
It filled me with delight.

He typed it up and posted it
To send it on its way.
My grandson, 9 years old, must have
My rhyming DNA!

Henry’s Poem (called “Veterans of the Ocean”)

Coast Guard guards the coast;
Beaches welcome their host.

Waves come,
Waves go,
Sand gets in your feet, oho!

Waves are high,
Waves are low,
How many veterans do you know?
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Kaufman Avatar
November 17, 2022 at 7:24 AM
This is adorable and I'm happy to know that you are able to live so close to your grands and be so instrumental in their lives. What a blessing Ilene. I don't have any grands but I have 50 sleeping puppets since I stopped doing free puppet shows for kids after covid and moving to Pa.
Slaughter Avatar
November 13, 2022 at 9:41 AM
That's one cool kid, Ilene. You should be proud.
Leffanta Avatar
November 12, 2022 at 9:59 AM
Well said and done by both! Aloha!
M  Avatar
November 12, 2022 at 5:30 AM
How truly beautiful Ilene….it must be in the blood for sure. Sweet poem by a sweet hearted boy i would say. No wonder Nana is proud!! Debx
Daniel Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 10:37 PM
A very smart one for a 9 year old, Ilene, you should be proud, thanks for posting it here and your introduction is superb too:)
Hankins Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 8:00 PM
Loved your introductory poem, Ilene. I know you are proud of your 9-year-old who penned a poem every bit as meaningful, lucid, and readable as many I read here on Poetry Soup from folks with many more years of experience. Encourage him!
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