Proposal In Poetic Style

Eyelids want to meet, River banks want to meet, But if the eyelids meet One would be blind, And if the banks meet River would be dry. My heart wants to meet yours And If they meet would love die ?
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Flannery Avatar
December 12, 2013 at 6:56 PM
Very neat thought and how true it is. Great write Kiran. Thank you for your comment also.
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February 15, 2014 at 7:45 AM
thank you for visiting. -Kiran.
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December 8, 2013 at 7:25 PM
Kiran,, , Congratulations on 'Your own favorite poem contest." I truly miss reading and scanning poems from the winning contest list. Hope you are well! Always & Forever * Linda
Bantawa Avatar
December 12, 2013 at 1:31 PM
thank you very much for visiting.
Deschler Avatar
December 2, 2013 at 7:46 PM
A very thought provoking poem about the uncertainty of love. I really liked the metaphors you used, Kiran! Really great work! Congratulations on your win!...Thank you for the kind congrats on my poem. I appreciate it very much!
Bantawa Avatar
December 12, 2013 at 1:32 PM
thanks for visiting!
Dietrich Avatar
December 2, 2013 at 6:15 PM
this is a very interesting analogy! I see you won the contest for a favorite poem. BIG congrats to you.
Bantawa Avatar
December 12, 2013 at 1:32 PM
yap, thank you very much!
Mehta Avatar
December 2, 2013 at 8:29 AM
Congrats on the win, Kiran
Bantawa Avatar
December 2, 2013 at 5:48 PM
thanks!
Andresen Avatar
December 2, 2013 at 6:04 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest: - A favorite poem of yours! -by Giorgio V. - A clear favorite poem! - Well done, Kiran !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Bantawa Avatar
December 2, 2013 at 5:48 PM
thanks!
Mehta Avatar
December 1, 2013 at 8:21 AM
Lovely romantic expressions, Kiran
Bantawa Avatar
December 2, 2013 at 5:47 PM
thanks!
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