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Proposal In Poetic Style

Eyelids want to meet, River banks want to meet, But if the eyelids meet One would be blind, And if the banks meet River would be dry. My heart wants to meet yours And If they meet would love die ?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 12/12/2013 6:56:00 PM
Very neat thought and how true it is. Great write Kiran. Thank you for your comment also.
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Kiran Bantawa
Date: 2/15/2014 7:45:00 AM
thank you for visiting. -Kiran.
Date: 12/8/2013 7:25:00 PM
Kiran,, , Congratulations on 'Your own favorite poem contest." I truly miss reading and scanning poems from the winning contest list. Hope you are well! Always & Forever * Linda
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Kiran Bantawa
Date: 12/12/2013 1:31:00 PM
thank you very much for visiting.
Date: 12/2/2013 7:46:00 PM
A very thought provoking poem about the uncertainty of love. I really liked the metaphors you used, Kiran! Really great work! Congratulations on your win!...Thank you for the kind congrats on my poem. I appreciate it very much!
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Kiran Bantawa
Date: 12/12/2013 1:32:00 PM
thanks for visiting!
Date: 12/2/2013 6:15:00 PM
this is a very interesting analogy! I see you won the contest for a favorite poem. BIG congrats to you.
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Kiran Bantawa
Date: 12/12/2013 1:32:00 PM
yap, thank you very much!
Date: 12/2/2013 8:29:00 AM
Congrats on the win, Kiran
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Kiran Bantawa
Date: 12/2/2013 5:48:00 PM
thanks!
Date: 12/2/2013 6:04:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest: - A favorite poem of yours! -by Giorgio V. - A clear favorite poem! - Well done, Kiran !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Kiran Bantawa
Date: 12/2/2013 5:48:00 PM
thanks!
Date: 12/1/2013 8:21:00 AM
Lovely romantic expressions, Kiran
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Kiran Bantawa
Date: 12/2/2013 5:47:00 PM
thanks!

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