Proposal

I would like to share all the sunrises with you,
see your stared smile in the surprises I do,
surprises of a love that survives pure and true,
and be the joker that can get a rise out of you.

The bloke you can ask that will always do,
be your best friend in life through and through.
When you're ill or when you're not I'll make you a brew,
if you doubt I'll let you know it's something you can do.

When we are old near death and can't see or hear,
I want to be the one that you sit near.

Would you be my bride so that everyday I can wake up beside you?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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October 14, 2018 at 1:39 PM
What sane woman could resist this invitation? lol Congrats on your top win, Nick.
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October 17, 2018 at 9:26 AM
3.5 billion women by my guesses lol, thanks Line
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October 13, 2018 at 8:20 AM
Nick, As I have said before, you are very talented and this poem proves it . Brilliant write. ~Warren
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October 17, 2018 at 9:26 AM
thanks Warren :)
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