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"......Prophecy......."

Revelations.... Tears are red Hearts are blue A pantheon Pantomimes Paradigms For, me and you Metaphores.... On distant shores Approaching Soon ~ Marching bands Dripping hands Warriors Beyond Your view.... Tears are red Hearts Their blue Melting stars This, bursting moon Pantomimes Panoramic signs.... Paradigms Foretold times Prophecies Coming True ~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The End of Days!?

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Gloria Benton

Date: 8/29/2010 3:45:00 PM

I like ths poem a lot. Very nice poem. Thank you too for your gratious comment on my poems. Gloria

Audrey Haick

Date: 8/23/2010 11:47:00 PM

Had to come to the very first to get a better glimpse of JCRhinem, Master Poet! :) Revelations are all about and one by one prophecies are being fulfilled before our eyes, even..my roses bloomed before May this year!!! Still shocked by that, now there's a report that the strong possibility of Israel is sitting on top of oil!!! OK, John it's 2:46 a.m., eastern time so I have to go. Love, Audrey

Nigel Fawcett

Date: 10/26/2008 10:56:00 AM

I love the simplicity of this beautifully written apocalypse revealed. I find very often in poetry, that less is more. Love, Nigel

Diane Christian

Date: 10/10/2008 7:00:00 AM

oh I like this poem, it is a great discription of the end of days, but at the end of days it will be just the beginning when our Lord comes, oh i look forqard to those new beginnins with him in paradise. thanks for you feed back on all my poems hope you are ok, we all fine, I am proud today my official b day 10th october and I got my form back from vineyard so I will be in childrens work, helping them learn about Jesus. anyway got to go school LOL for the kids, bless you john from diane