"......Prophecy......."

Revelations....

Tears are red

Hearts are blue

A pantheon 

Pantomimes

Paradigms

For, me and you

Metaphores....

On distant shores

Approaching

Soon ~

Marching bands

Dripping hands

Warriors

Beyond 

Your view....

Tears are red

Hearts 

Their blue

Melting stars

This, bursting moon

Pantomimes

Panoramic signs....

Paradigms

Foretold times

Prophecies

Coming 

True ~

~~~~~~~~~~~~~

The End of Days!?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Benton Avatar
August 29, 2010 at 3:45 PM
I like ths poem a lot. Very nice poem. Thank you too for your gratious comment on my poems. Gloria
Haick Avatar
August 23, 2010 at 11:47 PM
Had to come to the very first to get a better glimpse of JCRhinem, Master Poet! :) Revelations are all about and one by one prophecies are being fulfilled before our eyes, even..my roses bloomed before May this year!!! Still shocked by that, now there's a report that the strong possibility of Israel is sitting on top of oil!!! OK, John it's 2:46 a.m., eastern time so I have to go. Love, Audrey
Fawcett Avatar
October 26, 2008 at 10:56 AM
I love the simplicity of this beautifully written apocalypse revealed. I find very often in poetry, that less is more. Love, Nigel
Christian Avatar
October 10, 2008 at 7:00 AM
oh I like this poem, it is a great discription of the end of days, but at the end of days it will be just the beginning when our Lord comes, oh i look forqard to those new beginnins with him in paradise. thanks for you feed back on all my poems hope you are ok, we all fine, I am proud today my official b day 10th october and I got my form back from vineyard so I will be in childrens work, helping them learn about Jesus. anyway got to go school LOL for the kids, bless you john from diane
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