Prone

prone

alone

so lonely

solely for him

pained pale limping heart

our love now quit

no visit

no phone

moan

emotionslovemissingninette

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Richard Lamoureux

October 22, 2015 at 8:20 AM

I hope this is fictional! You did the form proud Cay Cay. It reads well forwards and backwards!

CayCay Godwin

October 22, 2015 at 1:32 PM

I had never read this FICTION backwards - how cool is that! I am so glad you read this one because I thought it had fallen thru the cracks. Thank you, Richard ... CayCay

Sara Kendrick

September 26, 2015 at 1:19 PM

I feel the sadness as I read this one..Very good expression of emotions..Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara

CayCay Godwin

September 28, 2015 at 5:46 PM

And I will be back to your page - it is very much on my mind. I'm glad you enjoyed my exercise with the ninette ... CayCay

Tim Ryerson

September 22, 2015 at 10:24 AM

This is a heartbreaking gem Cay Cay...Never heard of a Ninette before but you have inspired me to look it up and give it a try...VERY well done - Tim

CayCay Godwin

September 22, 2015 at 11:01 AM

Thank you, Tim. When I read about Ninette, I felt compelled to do it as an exercise. Would eventually like to take all Forms on. Give it a go, you'll enjoy yourself ... CayCay

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