Prone

prone alone so lonely solely for him pained pale limping heart our love now quit no visit no phone moan

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/22/2015 8:20:00 AM

I hope this is fictional! You did the form proud Cay Cay. It reads well forwards and backwards!

CayCay Jennings
Date: 10/22/2015 1:32:00 PM

I had never read this FICTION backwards - how cool is that! I am so glad you read this one because I thought it had fallen thru the cracks. Thank you, Richard ... CayCay

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/26/2015 1:19:00 PM

I feel the sadness as I read this one..Very good expression of emotions..Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara

CayCay Jennings
Date: 9/28/2015 5:46:00 PM

And I will be back to your page - it is very much on my mind. I'm glad you enjoyed my exercise with the ninette ... CayCay

Tim Ryerson

Date: 9/22/2015 10:24:00 AM

This is a heartbreaking gem Cay Cay...Never heard of a Ninette before but you have inspired me to look it up and give it a try...VERY well done - Tim

CayCay Jennings
Date: 9/22/2015 11:01:00 AM

Thank you, Tim. When I read about Ninette, I felt compelled to do it as an exercise. Would eventually like to take all Forms on. Give it a go, you'll enjoy yourself ... CayCay