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Promises of Pain

As he stepped outa the dark Left without a mark Some cheered, some mad Is he good or bad? Is he even a man? Few thought, so they ran The line can be thin The story, Oh where to begin Actually won't waste your time I'll just tell you another rhyme Blood dripped from his blade From the kills he had made Chewing on a finger His gaze didn't linger If it did and on you, You can bet your through Fight if you can, Be entertaining He'll hold you by the feet, As your blood is draining Skinned alive None have thrived Can't kill him he's already dead I don't even think that's his head He's been here since the start of time And he'll stay till the end of this rhyme He'll eat your heart At the very start A wicked, Wicked smile That lasts all the while His roar is immense Sign of the pain to commence Escape, Yea you should try Or just lay there and die Fight that's what you do GOD has your back, You already knew

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Date: 11/5/2018 11:37:00 AM
Not a very nice person depicted here, well done Jay...
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Jay Moore
Date: 11/5/2018 11:39:00 AM
I know them best Charlie. Haha. Thank you for seeing
Date: 11/3/2018 4:38:00 PM
Kept trying to figure out which "undead" monster this might be. Seems like Michael Myers and Freddie had many lives, but your words took me to vampires and zombies. Very clever use of suspense!
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Date: 11/3/2018 5:33:00 PM
I can't say anymore, Haha. Thanks for reading Carolyn
Date: 11/3/2018 3:30:00 PM
This scary monster you portrayed quite well..suspenseful write. Well done, Jay.
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Date: 11/3/2018 5:32:00 PM
Thank you Vijay

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