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6/27/2026 for Broken Promises Poetry Contest sponsored by Silent One

Promises

Promises are dubious transactions
made by lovers in their interactions,
often given by one without a thought
for affections of the moment, they have sought.

The naive, so often they believe,
words not meant really to deceive,
but spoken, in sincerest fashion,
in a moment of romantic passion.

Shakespeare said it and I agree,
"Neither a borrower nor a lender be". 
The same might be said of promises -
we should all be doubting Thomases.
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Goldsmith Avatar
July 8, 2026 at 12:44 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading. Your "Promises" is a powerful write. Love how you added Shakespeare. Have a blessed day with your win..........
Crandall Avatar
July 8, 2026 at 4:37 PM
Thanks, Paula! I guess 'ol Shakepeare had a thing or two to say!
One Avatar
July 7, 2026 at 2:21 PM
Promises are dubious transactions.. so very true... as are a lot of words from a liar.. congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Crandall Avatar
July 7, 2026 at 8:30 PM
Thanks, Silent One! It was fun - gearing up for the next one!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
June 27, 2026 at 3:59 PM
I tend to agree with your ending wisdom.
Crandall Avatar
June 28, 2026 at 3:51 PM
Yep...unfortunately!
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