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Promises

promises blooming like flowers in unfertile soil ~are seeds that can't take root

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 12/8/2023 3:32:00 PM

a wise and brilliant Monoku. Nicely done, have a splendid evening, Sara

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 12/8/2023 7:55:00 AM

A brilliant monoku my friend. Wise words indeed.

Silent One

Date: 12/8/2023 3:31:00 AM

Oh I love this one... excellent analogy and i love anything with flowers.. fragile promises like flowers will wither away... i want evergreen promises... I will fave this one dear poetess...

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 12/8/2023 7:02:00 AM

It is so easy to let a promise slip between your lips, but its that much harder to stick to the promise on hand sometimes. thank you for reading, Silent One. I appreciate you

Hiya Sharma

Date: 12/8/2023 3:02:00 AM

Sigh, so much has been expressed here within such few words.. Those promises which are held on the foundation of lies and deceit, can never flourish and bloom in flowers of hope.. They are the seeds which can't take firm roots.. This is one of the most impactful and gorgeously knitted monoku I've read.. Beautiful it is, dear Rose..

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 12/8/2023 7:01:00 AM

Thank you for leaving a comment dear poet Hiya, empty promises do more harm than we know. I always do my best to keep my promises

Ink Empress

Date: 12/8/2023 3:00:00 AM

So true and so profound. What a deep thought you’ve delivered in such a poetic and artistic manner dear sweet rose! I love this especially “ flowers in unfertile soil” creative! One of the best monokus ive read in a while. Sending you light always. Pleasure reading this

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 12/8/2023 7:00:00 AM

Your lovely comments always contain so much substance dear poet, nursing a cold right now, so you comment brightened me up :)