Promises

Promises are bestowed Pledges made from their hearts Precious vows of marriage Proclaiming troths of love Plighted to each other Personified with rings Partners 'til death do part April 10, 2021 Pleiades P Poetry Contest Sponsored by Kim Merryman

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/13/2021 4:45:00 AM

Very descriptive of the marriage vows. How many people even think about what those vows mean? Congrats on your winner. Way to go. Sara

Jenna Logan
Date: 4/13/2021 8:42:00 AM

Too many say them as just empty words, perhaps meant at the time, but lose their importance at the first sign of trouble. Thanks, Sara.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/13/2021 2:38:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win ... promises that should be kept - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jenna Logan
Date: 4/13/2021 8:40:00 AM

Yes, they should. Thanks so much, Anne-Lise.

Kathleen Austin

Date: 4/12/2021 2:38:00 PM

How sweet and sentimental without being overly mawkish. A lovely read and a well deserved first place!

Jenna Logan
Date: 4/13/2021 8:40:00 AM

Thanks, Kathleen. I appreciate your thoughts.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 4/12/2021 2:08:00 PM

A big CONGRATS on your well-deserved win, Jenna. Janice

Jenna Logan
Date: 4/13/2021 8:39:00 AM

Thank you very much for such nice remarks, Janice.

Kim Merryman

Date: 4/12/2021 2:00:00 PM

Jenna, a beautiful picture of promises! Congrats on your 1st place win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M

Jenna Logan
Date: 4/12/2021 4:54:00 PM

Thank you very much for the placement, Kim.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/12/2021 1:09:00 PM

what a wonderful way to go with Promises. Great job and win. Congratulations

Jenna Logan
Date: 4/12/2021 4:54:00 PM

Thank you.

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/10/2021 7:49:00 AM

Hi Jenna, You used the letter P very well in this well-written Pleiades. You captured what marriage is all about. This should do well in the contest. Best wishes in the contest. PS, Nice painting too. Did you paint it? If so, you're a good artist. Enjoy the rest of your day and weekend:-) Alexis

Jenna Logan
Date: 4/10/2021 8:19:00 AM

Hi Alexis. No, this is not one of my paintings. Thanks for stopping in and leaving your thoughts.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/10/2021 7:31:00 AM

You captured the wedding vows well in your pleiades Jenna. Mine are a blur now but it only seems like yesterday. Hope weekend is going well. Tom

Jenna Logan
Date: 4/10/2021 8:18:00 AM

Hi Tom. your vows may be blurred, but your love certainly is not. Thanks for everything. Weekend is rainy but I like it. Hopes yours is 'spiffy!'