Promise of Light

In the tunnel of life, 
I follow the promise faint
of light and I live.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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June 16, 2017 at 12:45 PM
A very beautiful written poem, I really enjoyed reading this one and others also, however here s tip, no offence, just an opinion, you do have talent, try to write bigger poems on a particular topic with verses, just an opinion however I m new on this site and would really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and give your honest reviews about them
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