Promise

Evicted from her garden by
a knowledge never sought,
was she villain, then, or victim in
a play that time forgot?

When tempted by an evil
bearing legendary fruit
did hunger conquer innocence?
Can history refute

this yarn of human weakness that
has passed from ancient times?
Is this a tale of simple truth
or fodder for our rhymes;

is it myth or could it be
a tapestry we weave
to chronicle the promise-- or
apocalypse of Eve?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Rutherford Avatar
May 4, 2011 at 12:39 PM
Dean I like what you have done with this, good always wins in the end. Welldone .Anne
Mehta Avatar
April 1, 2011 at 11:05 AM
Nice write on the legendery myth, Dean
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