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PROMISE I give you heart, to lift us if there's sorrow to guide us to what God alone can see, I give you faith, to help us want tomorrow; to make of life what we'd have life to be, I give you hope, for times without a reason, the very hope that brought your love to me; so we can know that season follows season and life is but what we make life to be. I give you love, that never has an ending, that knows no bounds, this love is all of me, and love from you is all my apprehending, that life will be what we make life to be. I give you me, yes all of me. Virginia Beach, VA 03/11/2011

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Date: 3/29/2012 8:36:00 AM
congrats on your featured poem of the week
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Date: 3/29/2012 8:20:00 AM
Congrats on the front-page piece, VV. Well metered and rhymed.
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Date: 3/29/2012 1:24:00 AM
i like the lines: i give you me"
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Date: 3/28/2012 3:48:00 PM
Congrats on the feature, V.V
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Date: 3/28/2012 5:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your premium featured write this week Veebdosa. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/27/2012 8:42:00 PM
wonderful poem and congrats on feature...Patrick
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Date: 3/21/2011 8:21:00 PM
That is indeed a very good "Promise"...thank you...
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