Promise

"If I promise to love you,"
I said with a smile, 
"What would you give me?
And make it worthwhile,"

"Would you give me a star,
straight from the night sky?
A celestial body,
to please my own eye?"

"Would you give me the ocean,
filled of the angels' tears?
A big salty pool,
to treasure for years?"

"Would you hand me the forests,
all green with life?
A leafy terrain,
to end all my strife?"

"But wait,"
I say, rethinking my query,
"Nevermind my love!"
I exclaimed, quite merry

"Don't answer that question,"
I explained to my dear,
"I will promise you that, no matter,
just promise the same, and I shan't shed a tear"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Beesley Avatar
August 1, 2010 at 1:13 PM
beautiful work absolutely captivating
Neels Avatar
July 29, 2010 at 6:10 PM
The promise of love so beautifully written.. - WNN
Delacroix Avatar
July 29, 2010 at 5:00 PM
A great write! And thanks for your comments on my latest. Haha! I understand now. Everything has a good reason and perhaps a bad one too. :) Caroline.
Sweetheart Avatar
July 29, 2010 at 4:37 PM
Great.. but Amy Green has the ladies entries for the same contest.. we are collaborating sponsors.. and doing contests is a great way to have your poetry noticed and read more frequently on site... enjoy...with luv..
Sweetheart Avatar
July 29, 2010 at 4:16 PM
Excellent write Alex.. enjoyed the soft flow of your words... till the end..it was entrancing... appreciate your wonderful comments on my poetry reads tonight... u should enter some of the contests posted especially mine.. become a 'god' and assume his persona for a poem.. good luck if u do... with luv..
Hales Avatar
July 29, 2010 at 4:09 PM
Enjoyed your write ..love the way you ask the questions ,thank you for reading my work sarah xx had to read this twice amazing write xx
Loving Iii Avatar
July 29, 2010 at 4:07 PM
this is the good side of love. john h loving iii
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