Promise

The day holds promise. 
                      New beginnings bring sunrise, 
                                                        a dawn for new starts.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Hilliker Avatar
May 1, 2010 at 4:12 PM
Beautiful Senryu! We all love new beginnings.
Dietrich Avatar
April 11, 2010 at 9:14 AM
I like this. This is how dawn makes most people feel. Very nice, Judy. LUv, Andrea
Fringe Avatar
March 21, 2010 at 11:54 PM
Yep, new starts and new beliefs or should I say the "reality of shattered stained-glass windows"?--which is at least honest. That's my shattered perspective of your wonderful words anyways lol. Good write. I see you strive for honesty--it shows. David B
Brown Avatar
March 5, 2010 at 9:53 AM
I am enjoying reading everyone's poetry today. I am glad to see your poetry posted here amongest the others I am reading today Judy. Wishing you a weekend filled with love and inspiration. Love, Carol
Smith Avatar
March 4, 2010 at 2:31 PM
very impressive senryu i enjoyed the read. Jo
Kendrick Avatar
March 4, 2010 at 2:00 PM
Sounds like a great change for the better in one's life. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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March 4, 2010 at 1:54 PM
May you have a beautiful warm sunrise....beautiful..Charma
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