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4x4x4 Poetry Contest, Sponsor - Miranda Hawley. Date written: 01/25/2025

Promenade


on the full moon
     i fix my gaze
look! a bloomed rose...
     it smells so nice!

fine day it is...
     folks wave at me
and i wave back
     while on my stroll.

there's much to see
     as well as hear
bird sings sweet song
     perched on tree stump.

out in fresh air
     i see great sights
oh, i don't want
     this day to end!
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Goldsmith Avatar
January 26, 2025 at 9:05 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. "Good Luck" Have a blessed day/week as you write away..................
Ibeh Avatar
January 26, 2025 at 9:52 AM
Thank you so much, Paula:-) Have a blessed day, too.
Hassall Avatar
January 25, 2025 at 4:43 PM
Beautiful poem! I love the simple things you highlight here that make your day!
Ibeh Avatar
January 25, 2025 at 5:07 PM
Thank you very much, Kathleen:-)
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