'prom Girl'

I saw my dream girl,
Walking past the door!
I asked myself: Is this the one,
Are you damn sure?

My heart said it is,
But my brain said No!
Confused I decided,
To ask my elder bro!

He said: Follow your heart,
N not your big brain!
I’m sure your efforts,
Won’t go down the drain!

Prom’s round the corner,
So I had to act fast!
Or else I’d end up,
Like always in the past!

Today she’s with me,
Dancing on the floor!
She’s the same girl I saw,
Walking past the door!

Dedicated with love to: You Know Who
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
July 28, 2010 at 6:04 AM
What a great array of poetry we have been presented to read today. I am happy yours is one of those poems I have read today. I hope your day brings you much inspiration so you may continue presenting your poetry to us to read Jose. Love, Carol
Jamal Avatar
July 27, 2010 at 7:54 AM
true life??? keralite here in uae
Culverhouse Avatar
July 27, 2010 at 6:24 AM
enjoyed reading your works today! Great write!
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