Paul Geiger Poet Haiku

Progression

form 5-7-5
random thoughts turned into words
making complete sense

    form 5-7-5
    profound thoughts transformed to words
    veiled sense almost grasped

        form 5-7-5
        zen-like thoughts crafted to words
        feeling is the sense

            form 5-7-5
            wispy thoughts awareness rises
            no feeling - meaning

                form 5-7-5
                progression is now complete
                where else might it go

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Skat A November 3, 2015 at 9:49 PM Paul, :) Congratulations on having your poem featured in the soups, Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~

Daver Austin November 2, 2015 at 11:50 AM Expressing the senses through haiku. Cleverly done. Haiku can be so subtle. Congrats. daver

Dr.Ram Mehta December 24, 2014 at 4:59 AM Nice write on the art of writing, Merry Christmas, Paul