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form 5-7-5 random thoughts turned into words making complete sense form 5-7-5 profound thoughts transformed to words veiled sense almost grasped form 5-7-5 zen-like thoughts crafted to words feeling is the sense form 5-7-5 wispy thoughts awareness rises no feeling - meaning form 5-7-5 progression is now complete where else might it go

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Date: 11/3/2015 9:49:00 PM
Paul, :) Congratulations on having your poem featured in the soups, Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Date: 11/2/2015 11:50:00 AM
Expressing the senses through haiku. Cleverly done. Haiku can be so subtle. Congrats. daver
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Date: 12/24/2014 4:59:00 AM
Nice write on the art of writing, Merry Christmas, Paul
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