Progression

Raindrops

Plip plops

     I feel it

Birds sing

Bells ring

     I hear it

Moon glows

On meadows

     I see it

Ideas grow

Words flow

     I read it

Voices silent

Echoes quiet

     I listen
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James Avatar
September 17, 2020 at 2:06 PM
I enjoyed your lovely poem very much, thank you, Emilia : )
Hoffman Avatar
September 17, 2020 at 6:31 PM
Thank you, Emilia! I am delighted you liked it.
Rebstock Avatar
August 18, 2019 at 1:24 PM
Giving credit to each of our senses in a pretty way. Enjoyed
Hoffman Avatar
August 18, 2019 at 9:50 PM
Thank you!
Foster Avatar
August 16, 2019 at 9:59 AM
This was a wonderful...whimsy... I loved every word. Excellent job my friend. Ann
Hoffman Avatar
August 16, 2019 at 8:55 PM
Thank you, Ann. I am glad you enjoyed it.
Kulkarni Avatar
July 17, 2019 at 3:17 PM
What a sweet poem Franci! I loved reading it! -Smita
Hoffman Avatar
July 17, 2019 at 5:30 PM
Thank you, Smita! I had fun writing it.
Hoffman Avatar
July 17, 2019 at 3:00 PM
Thank you, Caren! I am glad you enjoyed it!
Krutsinger Avatar
July 17, 2019 at 6:09 AM
I listen and I smile, for I am seeing it, hearing it and feeling it when I read this fast-paced poem, my friend!
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