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I have done nothing
but cry over you for days...
I guess that's something
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Brown Avatar
June 7, 2012 at 7:45 AM
When I click on one of your poems I know it will be exceptional Tracy. Thank you for sharing your words with us. I hope all is well with you and yours. I will stop back again soon. Love, Carol
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October 24, 2008 at 5:20 PM
Interesting perspective in this poem. The last line was a surprise--nice touch. The title is fitting for the poem. Keep on writing. Karen
Winter Avatar
October 10, 2008 at 6:33 AM
Oh gosh, this is sad. Hope it is not true, too. Love, Shar
Reynolds Avatar
October 9, 2008 at 4:30 PM
Yikes, yeah, that is something...a clever poem, i hope this comes from imagination and not rl. love me
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October 9, 2008 at 4:02 PM
Lot's of emotion in this. Well written with so few words. Just a thought...A Haiku is about nature, a Senru is written the same way, but it can be about anything..:)...Linda
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