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Profusion Couplet

P R Orchestra blazing Mozart, overtures fill a pining heart, F U S I Overwhelmed ventricles part, passive piece a le carte, N By David Kavanagh Kim’s Acrostic Play Poetry Contest 09/11/2020

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David Kavanagh

Date: 11/12/2020 3:39:00 PM

Thanks Christopher it’s more difficult than I expected, Kim will throw me out of the contest I keep changing the wording, cheers David,

Christopher Flaherty
Date: 11/15/2020 12:46:00 PM

Not quite sure David if placement or entry even quite matter my fiend. Do this for long enough and it just feels like making up the numbers . That being said it doesn't or shouldn't in anyway devalue how good your poem is David

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 11/12/2020 3:28:00 PM

This is very very good my friend. Love the descriptive use of fusion word's play