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purple profusion 
pine green supported....
hummingbird's whirrs

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Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 8/9/2024 4:13:00 AM

Dear Sara, Whenever I see Haiku I have to read them. Yours is a wonderful and insightful read and I would say it is outstanding. Keep Writing, - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/9/2024 6:54:00 AM

I appreciate the high regard of my Haiku, Daniel. I enjoyed writing that one. It took a few tries to get it like I wanted it. Sara K

Ink Empress

Date: 8/9/2024 3:44:00 AM

Love the alliterations and the softness of your imagery flowing throughout this beautiful haiku. Stunning! Always love how you describe things in few words dear sara. Pleasure reading your work. Sending you light

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/9/2024 6:53:00 AM

Why, thank you, IE. I appreciate the visits and kind review. I have the Mexican Petunia growing in my back yard area and it survived my husband's spraying with weed killer so the hummingbirds are feeding as much as they can get from this plant. Sara K

Yolanda Nicholsen

Date: 8/9/2024 3:36:00 AM

This is extraordinary an beautiful piece many blessings

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/9/2024 6:45:00 AM

Why, thank you, Yolanda. I appreciate the visit. Sara K

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/8/2024 9:36:00 PM

Lots of great imagery in a little ku

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/9/2024 12:50:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea. I need a strong turn to make it more of a surprise. Sara K

Robert James Liguori

Date: 8/8/2024 8:25:00 AM

Nice use of colors and action. A very pleasant read.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/8/2024 8:37:00 AM

Why, thank you, Robert. I appreciate the visit and kind review of my work. Sara K

Duke Beaufort

Date: 8/8/2024 8:23:00 AM

Sara, it's wonderful when we get to see hummingbirds. They really are remarkable and interesting to watch. Smiles!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/8/2024 8:36:00 AM

Yes, Duke, they whirr in, eat and leave so fast that it is hard to see them. If you put a feeder in your yard, it helps lure them in and a better chance of seeing them. Thanks for the visit. Sara K