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Profuse With Blooms

My heart bled as the chainsaw ran As the sap spilled forth from the roses onto the ground I felt violated just as they Soon they would have been profuse with blooms

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/1/2011 5:17:00 PM
It's free verse Sarah, I would just break it up a bit differentMy heart bled/ as the chainsaw ran/As the sap spilled forth from the roses onto the ground/I felt violated/just as they/Soon they would have been/ profuse with blooms..strong vibrant image! Ligfht & Love
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Date: 2/26/2011 9:24:00 AM
this one displays your sensitivity toward nature.... how easy it is for us to violation nature's beauty.
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Date: 2/24/2011 1:39:00 PM
Elegant way of describing the chainsaw and the sap onto the roses Sara.. great imagery in every line luv..
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Date: 2/24/2011 1:32:00 PM
Nice write but why the chainsaw ran, Sara?
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Date: 2/24/2011 1:18:00 PM
Smile!? ~ Amid a certain light in empathies touch, I could feel "Your Beautiful 'Heart & Soul,'" rising from this paintings vibrantly deep colours and hues; a sign of a truly gifted poetess, indeed ~ And this truth unto my own humbled self once more says that, "Yes, 'Your Beauty,' Belongs Amid 'The Stars Sooo Bright!!!'" ~ love, Always, christopher ~
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Date: 2/24/2011 1:10:00 PM
Smile!? ~ First I wish to "Thank 'Your Beauty,'" for stopping by and blessing my humbled self with "Your Lovely Light" and kind com although no, tis not for any contest; that's not really my cup of tea but, I can Imagine the many blessings upon others that such things thus bring and, as for this very bluebrightly brushed in profound canvas "My Dear, 'Precious & Lovely Sara Kendrick'" ~ cont:)
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Date: 2/24/2011 10:46:00 AM
making room for what? and my last work is only half finished. i'm going to have to delete it soon. john
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Date: 2/24/2011 8:48:00 AM
a sad tale of destruction of beauty...TAH
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