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Profuse With Blooms

My heart bled as the chainsaw ran
As the sap spilled forth from the roses onto the ground
I felt violated just as they
Soon they would have been profuse with blooms

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Debbie Guzzi

March 1, 2011 at 5:17 PM

It's free verse Sarah, I would just break it up a bit differentMy heart bled/ as the chainsaw ran/As the sap spilled forth from the roses onto the ground/I felt violated/just as they/Soon they would have been/ profuse with blooms..strong vibrant image! Ligfht & Love

Julie Heckman

February 26, 2011 at 9:24 AM

this one displays your sensitivity toward nature.... how easy it is for us to violation nature's beauty.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 24, 2011 at 1:39 PM

Elegant way of describing the chainsaw and the sap onto the roses Sara.. great imagery in every line luv..

Kash Poet

February 24, 2011 at 1:32 PM

Nice write but why the chainsaw ran, Sara?

Christopher Marcum

February 24, 2011 at 1:18 PM

Smile!? ~ Amid a certain light in empathies touch, I could feel "Your Beautiful 'Heart & Soul,'" rising from this paintings vibrantly deep colours and hues; a sign of a truly gifted poetess, indeed ~ And this truth unto my own humbled self once more says that, "Yes, 'Your Beauty,' Belongs Amid 'The Stars Sooo Bright!!!'" ~ love, Always, christopher ~

Christopher Marcum

February 24, 2011 at 1:10 PM

Smile!? ~ First I wish to "Thank 'Your Beauty,'" for stopping by and blessing my humbled self with "Your Lovely Light" and kind com although no, tis not for any contest; that's not really my cup of tea but, I can Imagine the many blessings upon others that such things thus bring and, as for this very bluebrightly brushed in profound canvas "My Dear, 'Precious & Lovely Sara Kendrick'" ~ cont:)