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Profound Elation

Incinerate me with your fierce ardor
Dissolve your very being into me
We converge and detonate
Into a state of bliss
Your osculations are exceptionally pleasurable
As i liquify and flow into your veins
To forever be in your heart literally
Intaking your ambiance straight to my brain
Seeping into your arms like molten wax
Endeavoring to extract your very essence
Longing uncontrollably for your contact
Your hands not only touches my skin
Your hands caresses my heart and soul
Sending me spiraling into penetrating delight
That overcomes my senses and renders me
Susceptible to your every impulse
Which always leaves my form 
Vibrating ferociously
Purrrrr

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/8/2013 7:39:00 PM
Whoa, intense poem you wrote here! Very good imagery, quite vibrant in your description of hmmm either love or lust...couldn't decide -very nice though! MC
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April Mitchell
Date: 8/8/2013 7:51:00 PM
Thank you it's like everything between passion and love and lust and romance!just a bunch of mixtures threw in there!lol
Date: 8/7/2013 9:02:00 AM
Early love infatuates the senses and overwhelms the psyche. It is a heavy drug well defined by your poem.
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April Mitchell
Date: 8/7/2013 6:45:00 PM
oh yes it is!hahaha!glad you got it!

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