Prodigal Patriots

Our sages’ pages and wages
Fading, folding and falling
… the prodigals named and shamed
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Kendrick Avatar
July 12, 2009 at 2:18 AM
Love your Haiku. You must write more. Sara
Spence Sr Avatar
July 7, 2009 at 4:03 PM
This is an excellent piece. I like the flow of the words and the alliteration approach to this haiku. It has an awesome message. Great job! ~Joseph
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June 27, 2009 at 12:09 PM
Such a creative use of just three lines for a thought provoking poem. Nice use of rhyme and alliteration. Good one! Karen
Strand Avatar
June 5, 2009 at 8:04 AM
Thank you for your welcome blog comments Adeleke.Rgds Brian
Shahwan Avatar
June 5, 2009 at 6:39 AM
Very beautiful.
Orozco Avatar
June 3, 2009 at 8:03 AM
Amazing! Great write! - jeremia
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