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Prodigal Patriots

Our sages’ pages and wages Fading, folding and falling … the prodigals named and shamed

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/12/2009 2:18:00 AM
Love your Haiku. You must write more. Sara
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Date: 7/7/2009 4:03:00 PM
This is an excellent piece. I like the flow of the words and the alliteration approach to this haiku. It has an awesome message. Great job! ~Joseph
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Date: 6/27/2009 12:09:00 PM
Such a creative use of just three lines for a thought provoking poem. Nice use of rhyme and alliteration. Good one! Karen
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Date: 6/5/2009 8:04:00 AM
Thank you for your welcome blog comments Adeleke.Rgds Brian
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Date: 6/5/2009 6:39:00 AM
Very beautiful.
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Date: 6/3/2009 8:03:00 AM
Amazing! Great write! - jeremia
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