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Prized Pickles Premiere Contest Winner

persians pickled firm and crunchy, thin and pint size - spice them with little red flakes and briny water. pack them side by side in a sparkling jar. twist, pop that top, fork-stab those puckery suckers. serve: alongside a sandwich - perhaps a plump pastrami or with dumplings drizzled with thick and savory gravy or combine spears with choice cheese on an appetizer plate, pleasing to the palate. experience the hiss, the crunch, the sluice of slipperiness — the bumpy pleasantly-green dill. 2/19/2020

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Date: 5/19/2020 6:37:00 PM
Hello Kim,a pickle no matter what type goes with any type of meal. My fav. is the dill pickle. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/20/2020 12:38:00 PM
Hi! Kim, Enjoy your day. Be safemy friend.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/19/2020 6:52:00 PM
You too, Darlene! Thank you!
Date: 2/23/2020 2:25:00 PM
You've engaged my sense so well that I've got to get a jar of pickles to go with my dish of ice cream! Congrats, Kim. Way to write! ~ Pregnant Polly
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/23/2020 3:58:00 PM
LOL...would you like a scoop of vanilla or chocolate, Polly ;)
Date: 2/23/2020 9:42:00 AM
mmm I'm wanting to raid the fridge now lol, many congrats Kim:-) hugs jan xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/23/2020 3:58:00 PM
LOL! :)
Date: 2/22/2020 10:43:00 PM
I am wanting some of these immediately if not sooner. Congratulations on your podium placed win Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/23/2020 3:59:00 PM
Thanks so much, dear friend! Hope you are feeling better!
Date: 2/22/2020 10:04:00 PM
My mouth is watering, your pickle description sounds delicious. Congratulations on your win.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/22/2020 10:06:00 PM
Thank you, Miranda!
Date: 2/22/2020 8:22:00 PM
An absolute delight - thoroughly a poem the reader can and wants to bite. It is witty, creative and enthralling. You had me from ... persians! So great having that pretty trophy - just love that it is low maintenance and goes perfect with your winning poem! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/22/2020 8:26:00 PM
Thank you, sweet lady, dear poetess! xx
Date: 2/22/2020 5:07:00 PM
Lol ... you sure know how to tease and tempt our palate with tasty pickles, Kim! :) I pickle anything that can be pickled! ~ Congratulations on that glittering trophy! Regards // paul
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/22/2020 5:08:00 PM
Thank you, Paul! :)
Date: 2/22/2020 4:18:00 PM
Kim, an amazingly fun write about pickles! I particularly liked "puckery suckers" and too many alliterative word-pairs to mention! Congrats on the well-deserved #1 in Nina's contest ~ John
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/22/2020 5:06:00 PM
Thank you, John! :)
Date: 2/22/2020 3:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/22/2020 3:47:00 PM
Thank you, Eve!
Date: 2/22/2020 3:06:00 PM
Congratulations on your number one spot! A great poetic recipe! Will have to try one now! :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/22/2020 3:47:00 PM
Thank you, Krish! :)
Date: 2/22/2020 2:50:00 PM
A mouth-watering write, Kim - made me want to rush out and get a pastrami sandwich smothered with dills! Congrats for winning the gold and many thanks for your kind comment re my entry - Bob
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/22/2020 3:47:00 PM
You’re welcome, Bob! This was a fun contest! Go get that pastrami!
Date: 2/22/2020 2:45:00 PM
I am not much of a pickle person...however your words make them sound enticing enough for someone who rarely eats them to want one... great write...congrats on your trophy win :) hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/22/2020 3:46:00 PM
Thank you, sweet lady! :)
Date: 2/22/2020 2:11:00 PM
My mouth is watering! Yummy win! Congratulations dear poetess! xomo <3
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/22/2020 3:45:00 PM
Thanks so much! Muah xx
Date: 2/22/2020 11:44:00 AM
Kim, congratulations on having the top pickle. A tasty poem to read. ~ Sonia
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/22/2020 12:09:00 PM
Hehe...thanks! So excited!
Date: 2/22/2020 11:10:00 AM
Kim, Congratulations on your win! I could see, taste and even smell these pickles! Thanks for gastronomic journey with your whimsical poem - so much fun!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/22/2020 12:09:00 PM
Thanks so much, Sam! :)
Date: 2/22/2020 9:28:00 AM
Congratulations Kim on your trophy win. Creative write.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/22/2020 12:10:00 PM
Thank you, Janis! :)
Date: 2/21/2020 7:03:00 AM
Enjoyable wonderful write. Lovely the firm and crunchy Persian pickle. Wishing all the best dear poet.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/21/2020 7:09:00 AM
Thanks so much, Sanjay! :)
Date: 2/20/2020 9:18:00 PM
Yummy! Love "the sluice of slipperiness —" :) ~Mark
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/20/2020 9:21:00 PM
Yay! :)
Date: 2/20/2020 1:29:00 PM
Helllo Kim, I enjoy the dill pickle. At times I would have 2 or 3 pickles on my plate. Have a nice day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/20/2020 5:26:00 PM
Ebjoy your evening my friend.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/20/2020 5:21:00 PM
Yummy! Be blessed, sweet friend!
Date: 2/20/2020 7:58:00 AM
My father used to pickle vegetables...I loved the calliflower and carrots... pleasantly pleasing
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/20/2020 5:22:00 PM
LOl...yes, pleasantly pleasing!
Date: 2/20/2020 4:24:00 AM
Never heard of Persian pickles but I do love kosher pickles with a sandwich of good lean pastrami in a crusty roll! Love all those sounds to recreate the experience of eating those pickles! Thanks for stopping to read my take on opera, Kim. / M
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/20/2020 7:54:00 AM
Thank you, Maurice!

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