Privatize

Inner party gives sanctuary:
Where lives are bought and sold en masse
And profit is viewed as the
One true gift to bestow
Upon a quiet
Unsuspecting
Populace
Valued
Cheap
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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May 22, 2009 at 8:30 PM
Interesting thoughts for the reader to ponder. I like the depth of this piece. It's amazing what people will do for money and power. Keep on writing! Karen
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May 13, 2009 at 12:56 PM
You have mail, Yoni.
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May 12, 2009 at 8:54 AM
thank you for your kind and constructive criticism forest. your level of maturity displays a wisdom far beyond your years for which I am very grateful. Good luck in all your future endeavors.
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May 11, 2009 at 3:31 PM
There are a lot of businesses that treat their workers like cattle, Yoni. Not good places to work. Great language and form in this nonet! Love, Carolyn
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