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Private Grief

The tears I cried Locked up inside When she died Nowhere to go. The love I felt Made my heart melt Was bitterly dealt A crushing blow. These silent tears Span days and years Of inner fears Yet nobody know. Aug 8/17 D H Loewen

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Date: 4/14/2018 4:03:00 AM
Commiserations, if this is your story. It is beautifully penned. Simple, sad and clear. Many wishes, Kai
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David Loewen
Date: 4/14/2018 4:21:00 AM
Thank you for your condolences. I lost my best friend to a heart attack at the age of 30 last June. It was a heartbreaking experience

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