David Loewen Poet Rhyme

Private Grief

The tears I cried
Locked up inside
When she died 
Nowhere to go.

The love I felt
Made my heart melt
Was bitterly dealt
A crushing blow.

These silent tears
Span days and years
Of inner fears
Yet nobody know.

Aug 8/17
D H Loewen

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Kai Michael Neumann April 14, 2018 at 4:03 AM Commiserations, if this is your story. It is beautifully penned. Simple, sad and clear. Many wishes, Kai David Loewen April 14, 2018 at 4:21 AM Thank you for your condolences. I lost my best friend to a heart attack at the age of 30 last June. It was a heartbreaking experience