Angela Crabtree Poet Rhyme

Pristine Landscape

Situations come our way
where we don't understand what to say
we sit in silence in our mind
and the words we can't seem to find

Some days we find it smooth
to spill our thoughts and soothe
to do this is when
I find myself again

Today is a quiet one
it's been that way since it begun
I find it challenging to write my lyric
that may sound satiric

I'll rest tonight in deep escape
and tomorrow twill be a pristine landscape

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Paul Callus November 27, 2020 at 11:31 AM I have learned to take each day as it comes, Angela, and try not to worry about tomorrow; maybe it's one of the benefits of old age :) Regards // paul Angela Crabtree November 27, 2020 at 5:13 PM I'm trying to learn to take one day at a time. Some days I do okay. Other days, not so much :)

Caren Krutsinger October 29, 2020 at 5:07 AM Very smoothly written. Your poems are better every second. Angela Crabtree October 29, 2020 at 4:56 PM Thanks Caren. I'm trying to improve on them as much as possible.

Silent One October 25, 2020 at 5:27 AM We all face a storm and it's how we deal with it that counts... Some become stronger in adversity, some fall apart... Great message of hope in your sonnet .. Angela Crabtree October 25, 2020 at 11:09 AM Thank you, Silent One :)

Vijay Pandit October 25, 2020 at 5:21 AM Some days are for introspection--well said, Angela. Angela Crabtree October 25, 2020 at 11:09 AM Thank you, Vijay :)

Tom Cunningham October 25, 2020 at 1:35 AM We often end up on a barren landscape not knowing what's up ahead but better days are coming with mountains, streams and flowers in abundance. We just have to learn patience. Tom Angela Crabtree October 25, 2020 at 11:08 AM Thank you, Tom :)

Victor Buhagiar October 24, 2020 at 10:05 PM Yes, there is always tomorrow. But not the the day after. Keep at it. ~~ Angela Crabtree October 25, 2020 at 11:08 AM Thank you, Victor :)

John Watt October 24, 2020 at 10:02 PM First off, I'm a big lover of the word 'pristine', happy to see it used in your title and final line. Secondly, loved your rhymes, especially smooth/soothe and lyric/satiric. Thirdly, the wisdom of finding rest and hoping for better tomorrows. Well done. Angela Crabtree October 25, 2020 at 11:07 AM Thank you, John :)