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Prisoner of fate

Jobless, indebted - battles with insanity - writes haiku shaiku

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/24/2011 4:31:00 AM
To all : Such gracious comments are like holding a toddler's hand to Library of Congress. Thank you so much.
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Date: 2/23/2011 8:10:00 PM
Saalik, The most appropriate form of haiku for a "time such as this." Blessings to you for you creativity and honest expression. Many soupers will relate with this!
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Date: 2/19/2011 6:55:00 PM
beautiful haiku with nice images, Saalik
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Date: 2/19/2011 6:38:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight..with many in same boat as u express in your Haiku lines.. hope your time on site will be fun and filled with sharing with luv..
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