Prisoner of Fate

Jobless, indebted -
battles with insanity 
- writes haiku shaiku
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Siddikki Avatar
February 24, 2011 at 4:31 AM
To all : Such gracious comments are like holding a toddler's hand to Library of Congress. Thank you so much.
Song Avatar
February 23, 2011 at 8:10 PM
Saalik, The most appropriate form of haiku for a "time such as this." Blessings to you for you creativity and honest expression. Many soupers will relate with this!
Mehta Avatar
February 19, 2011 at 6:55 PM
beautiful haiku with nice images, Saalik
Sweetheart Avatar
February 19, 2011 at 6:38 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight..with many in same boat as u express in your Haiku lines.. hope your time on site will be fun and filled with sharing with luv..
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